MANUSCRIPT ASSESSMENT

A manuscript assessment of your novel. Chapter by chapter.

A manuscript assessment is a written verdict on a complete novel: structure, pacing, characters, internal continuity, style and how ready the book is to go out. Vellam reads the whole manuscript and ties every observation to the chapter and passage that prompted it.

Human assessment
1,200-1,500 USD
several weeks
Vellam
25 USD
one afternoon
Gustave Doré, Don Quixote, 1863
The Other Side of the Lake Tension chapter by chapter · select a chapter 12 chapters, 6 notes
Chapter 9 The Storm Tension: 44/100
  • Critical The investigation thread breaks off The lead from chapter 4 never returns in the finale.
  • Medium Anna's hair colour Chapter 2: red. Here: jet black.
WHAT VELLAM CHECKS

Analysis that leads back to the manuscript.

  1. Structure and story arc

    Places setup, turns and resolution in the order they actually appear in the manuscript and flags the chapters where the story stops moving.

  2. Pacing chapter by chapter

    Shows how tension and scene density are distributed across the book, so you can see where a reader drifts and what deserves cutting.

  3. Characters and consistency

    Tracks traits, motives and relationships across chapters and marks the changes the text never explains.

  4. Continuity and timeline

    Compares dates, ages, places and objects between scenes so contradictions surface before your beta readers find them.

  5. Style and prose

    Collects the habits that repeat, from adverbs and passive voice to filter words, always with examples pulled from your own text.

  6. A revision decision list

    Strengths, weak points and a list of calls to make, ordered by impact and ready for the next draft.

Vittore Carpaccio, The Vision of Saint Augustine, 1502
Overall score strong 70
Characters 83
Structure & plot 80
Language & style 74
Dialogue 64
Pacing & scene craft 62
Ending & payoff 58

An illustrative example. In the app you recompute the whole score this way, dimension by dimension.

CHOOSING THE RIGHT SUPPORT

Three different readings of the same manuscript.

A comparison of Vellam, a human editorial assessment and a general chatbot
Criterion Vellam Editorial assessment General chatbot
Starting point The complete manuscript, read chapter by chapter in order. The complete manuscript, read by a working editorial professional. The excerpt you paste into the conversation.
Shape of the result Findings anchored to the chapter and passage that prompted them. An editorial letter with judgement, nuance and priorities. A single answer to a single prompt.
When it fits Before every revision, as many times as you rewrite the book. When you want human judgement on genre, market and intent. Quick questions about a paragraph or an idea.
COMMON QUESTIONS

Plain answers without promises beyond the manuscript.

001 What is a manuscript assessment?

A written verdict on a complete novel. It covers structure, pacing, characters, internal continuity and style, and ends with the list of things worth fixing before the book goes out.

002 How much does a manuscript assessment cost?

Editorial assessments run at roughly 1.5 to 2 cents per word, which is about 1,200 to 1,500 USD for an 80,000-word novel, and a developmental edit runs higher again. Vellam is 25 USD one-time for a pack that covers roughly 100,000 words of analysis.

003 How long does it take?

A single chapter takes minutes. A full manuscript depends on its length, but the order of magnitude is an afternoon rather than several weeks.

004 What exactly do I get?

A report for every chapter and a whole-book view: story arc, pacing, character and place profiles, continuity contradictions, style patterns and a decision list ordered by impact.

005 Does it replace a developmental edit?

No, it comes before one. The cleaner the manuscript an editor receives, the fewer hours go to problems a tool catches anyway and the more go to work only a person can do.

006 Does Vellam replace a human editor?

Vellam does not replace a human editor and does not decide whether your novel is ready for a publisher. It organises what the manuscript already shows, and the judgement stays yours.

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Pricing

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  • Write the whole book in the editor, no word limit
  • Export to .docx whenever you want
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Enough for ~2,000 word analysis.

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Enough for ~40,000 word analysis.

A short story, a novella or a few chapters to check.

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For shorter novels or to get started.

Series

$99.99 one-time · 1,000,000 credits

Enough for ~400,000 word analysis.

Several novels or a whole series, with room for new drafts.

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For writers working on a whole series. Contact us if you need more.

What credits pay for

One credit balance works across almost the whole app. You never buy analysis and chat separately: every feature takes what it uses from the same balance.

  • Chapter and full-book analysis
  • Consistency analysis
  • Craft analysis
  • Reader reaction
  • Chat with a character
  • Chat with the assistant
  • Fact check
  • Translations

A full analysis uses the most, about 2.5 credits per word. A chat with the assistant or a fact check usually costs a few hundred credits. Writing, the Story Bible and export are always free.

In every pack

  • Know what is off in your plot, characters and locations
  • An analysis that knows your world and your rules
  • Upload a finished .docx, .txt or .pdf
  • Every chapter read in the context of the whole book
  • Your text never trains any models
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